Jeremy's Resume Review

[mojorig]

Could you please review my resume and tell me if things need to be changed.

Thanks
Jeremy

[mojorig]

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[Mike Cork]

Jeremy, this looks really good to me. I think you need to get some numbers in here though. Like with the articles you write? what is the expected distribution for that and will you be able to add sponsors to those write ups?

In all these tournaments and fishing trips that you make, how many miles will you put on your vehicle? These miles equal views to potential customers for your possible sponsors 

You want to be able to tell your potential sponsors that you are going to put their name and logo in front of X number of viewers or potential customers

[mojorig]

Would you put something under where I mention the website like 5000 unique hits a month and Posted 25 report in 2008.

How would I integrate in there how many potential viewers into my resume? This is where I start getting lost!!

[Ron Fogelson]

Would you put something under where I mention the website like 5000 unique hits a month and Posted 25 report in 2008.

How would I integrate in there how many potential viewers into my resume? This is where I start getting lost!!

It's just a writers touch to hit all the high notes you want covered and how best to include everything.  I can't tell you where or how to put it in but it should flow with the rest of the information, folks can give you suggestions on it but in the end it's however you write that will determine where it fits best.