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[tfly73]

Tim McFadden
address
Home #(xxx)xxx-xxxx, Cell #(XXX)xxx-xxx
htmcfly@yahoo.com



Personal Information:    

I am married to a wonderful wife who is 100% behind my fishing career; we have 2 delightful boys.  I am a founding member of KTBA Bass Club (my local club) and am currently on my 3rd year as Chairman of this fishing club. In the 3 years that I have held this position the membership has tripled. KTBA Bass Club was established in 1992.  The KTBA Bass Club has teamed up with a local cub scouts group and organized a "Kids Day Fishing Tournament" in order to teach the kids the art of angling, casting, lure selection, reading the water, catch and release, proper handling and sportsmanship. I am a large supporter of protecting the sport of fishing and I am greatly dedicated to helping reach out to the younger generation and teach them to be future anglers. 


Background:

2004-2008 I have had 15 1st-3rd place finishes in my local club tournaments
2007-  7th place ABA Weekend Tournament at 1000 Islands
2006-  12th place BASS Weekend Series on Oneida Lake,
    10th place at Potomac River 3-day BASS Northeast Regional Tournament
    (see article attached from my local newspaper)
2005-  13th place and Big Bass in BASS Weekend Series on Cayuga Lake



My pledge:

I am dedicated to the lures and equipment that I use, targeting sponsorship only from their suppliers.
I will locally and statewide represent your product to other anglers.
I am eager to grow in the Bass Fishing Industry.



EXPOSURE = BUSINESS


Fishing for a living has to be a sin!!

[Ron Fogelson]

I think you have a good start for a cover sheet.

Might want to look at putting your tournament history from latest to oldest and do your best to not guess at the number of places you finished.

[blake711]

You may want to edit out your personal info for this post.  replace phone with XXX-XXX and so on..  Just so your personal info is not getting spread across the net.

Blake