my first resume please get out the red pen all advise welcome

[jigga318]

WILLIAM SILVA 
10 Ford Avenue Cumberland RI 02864   
Wildbill318@yahoo.com


Objective
To obtain sponsors so that I can promote the products I use and believe in .And in turn the sponsor can help me with what ever they see fit .tournament entry fees ,fuel costs and or products .I understand that I will have to prove myself to you before you make a big investment in me ,I am willing to do whatever I can to promote your product .


Tournament Experience
1999  - Fifth place overall in the final standings for the year Breakaway Bass masters 
2000  - Two first place finishes 15 times in the top five in open events third place overall in the final standings for    the year Breakaway Bass masters. 
2001 -  Five first place finishes 15 times in the top five in open events first place overall in the final standings for the             
   Year Breakaway bass masters Angler of the year
2002-2006  - 50 times in the  top five in open events.
2007- Present -One  first place finish ,ten times in the top three ,three times in the top five second place overall in the final standings for the year East Bay Bass masters

2008  Season East Bay Bass masters club events, American Bass Anglers tournaments for division 100,
   The Fishing RI trail ,and the TBF team trail, and there is also room for a few open events.   


Exposure
   I will talk about your products and how they keep me on top of the leader board .I will also be available for any seminars or events you would like me to attend . Your name and logo can also be placed on my truck rear window or on my boat .There is also room on my tournament jersey for your name and or logo .Sponsors contributions' will determine logo size and location. I am also a member of Ultimate Bass an online fishing forum with lots of exposure to viewers across the nation. Your logo  can also be posted at myspace/wildbill318   which is also a well viewed sight

About Me 
I am 27yrs old and have been hooked on bass fishing since I was twelve at 18 I joined a bass club and have been fishing ever since. I am a union carpenter ,I am single with no kids. I have one goal in mind going pro it is a long tough road to get there but I am willing to put in the work .

Boat and Equipment
   I have a 18ft Ranger bass boat with a 150 horsepower Evinrude  outboard and a Motor Guide trolling motor . I use Shimano  and Quantum reels with Allstar and St Croix rods                                                     

Current Sponsors
Outlaw Jigs prostaff


Education
Cumberland high school 1994-1998
Woonsocket vocational school 1995-1998

[Swede]

Will come back to this one as I don't have the time to commit to it right now - looks like a very good start though. 

Commas - a space always comes after the comma, never before it (like in this sentence).  Never start a sentence with the word "And".  Just a couple of little things I saw upon first glance.

Swede