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[coloradoman25]

Who: Christopher "Zero Hour" Dombkowski
Born: October 31st, 1980 Rochester, NY
Resides: 3190 Tiffany Terrace Colorado Springs, Co 80920
Contact Info: 719-510-5555 Daiwafan25@yahoo.com


Current Position 
    School Age Programs Coordinator, Dept of Defense USAF Academy, CO
   
    Pro-Staff Clearwater Custom Tackle, Rudy Project, Boommers Custom Jigs and Baits
   

What can I offer your company?

Promote products at seminars and boat events as well as add internet links to your products from my personal web page.

Promote products at various children's and military charity events which receive media coverage.

Include company name in signature on Bassboatcentral.com, Ultimatebas.com, Coloradofisherman.com, Westernbass.com, Texas Fishing Forum.com, NYBASS.com

   
Display logos on Tournament apparel on and off the water.

Display logos on both Tow vehicle and Boat.

Provide honest product feedback to anglers though out the region and promote your   products through results on the water as well as written articles and radio talk show appearances.
 
Provide weekly, monthly, quarterly or annual progress reports.
   

Profile
Pikes Peak Bassmasters Colorado Springs, CO
2006 Vice-President 2007 Vice-president 2008 Vice-president and Tournament Director



Biography
Age: 27
   I was born in 1980 in Rochester, NY.  Started fishing around age four, and have not looked back since.  While growing up I spent much of my time fishing the St. Lawrence and Finger Lakes Regions.  Upon graduating high school I spent my four years of college in Erie, PA fishing the Smallmouth infested waters just outside Presque Isle Bay.
   I began tournament Bass fishing in 2004 with the Rochester Bassmasters in New York.  After a first year learning experience I moved from a 43rd place finish up to the top 20 in my second year.  I was married in 2005 and my wife Karen joined the Air force and I began working for the Department Of Defense.  We are currently residing in Colorado Springs and are stationed at the USAF Academy.  I spent the past 3 years cutting my teeth in lakes spanning from Idaho to Texas learning how to fish lakes with all different types of cover and structure.

Achievements
-   2005 Top 25 Rochester Bassmasters NY
-   2006 Rookie of the Year PPBM
-   2006 Top Ten PPBM (7)
-   2006 Classic Winner Lake Pueblo, CO PPBM
-               2007 Colorado BASS Federation State Team (11)
-               2007 Top Ten PPBM (1)
-               2007 PPBM Angler Of The Year
-             2008 Participant Western Divisional
-             2008 Top Ten PPBM (3)
-             2008 Classic Winner Ute Lake, NM PPBM
-             2008 TBF FLW State Qualifier 2nd place W/ CO Doug Shatto
Equipment
-         Clearwater Custom Tackle Plastics
-         2006 Skeeter 20I 250 Yamaha HPDI
-               Rudy Project Eyewear
-               Boommers Custom Jigs and Baits

[Mike Cork]

Post this in the chop shop and we'll cut and work with it there so you can keep a final copy here