I just posted my Resume help me out with it please

[Grubfisher01]

Name: Peyton Howell
Age:18
Roanoke, Va
l540ltrigger@yahoo.com

Looking for a amateur sponsor or any sponsor that i can help make them more money and help me out to.
What i can do for a sponsor is get their name out i have a myspace i have a ton of friends and i can add my sponsor to that. I love fishing i float tons of rivers around me and go on the lake a lot i can put stickers on my boat, my car, and even my work trucks me and my dad own a Roofing business that we can put the sponsor on i have hats shirts i can put the sponsor on we go around to newspapers, magazines even schools and put sponsors in there or on the stadium anywhere i can get your name out and hopefully ya ll can help me get to where i want too be i just had a baby shes 2 months old and its a girl I'm age 18 and I'm willing to do anything for anyone i love fishing and i try to fish when I'm not working or taking care of my little girl but i need help making my fishing career better and i can help ya ll by putting your name out there also i make a lot of fishing shows on youtube that i can add the sponsor too well hope a sponsor makes a good choice and picks me thank you

[Mike Cork]

GrubFisher01, looks like you have a ton of potential to put a company's name in front of people. See if you can figure out how many people. Things like how many folks does that stadium hold and how often is it filled? My Space isn't a huge attacker of potential sponsors but it's more folks seeing a company name.

Do you belong to a bass club or fish any circuits? Potential sponsors are looking to get direct marketing, meaning putting their name in front of the MOST fisherman possible

Check out my resume "Mike Cork", not by any means saying it's the best (desperately needs updated) but it will give you an idea of how to lay it out and some of the things that I think are important on a resume.