How good is my Resume plz reply

[Grubfishr01]

Name: Colby      
Hometown: Roanoke , Va
Home Lake : Smith Mountain Lake
Home River : Roanoke River , New River, and James River
Age: 22
Email: imurplacebo@aol.com

Resume:

Dear Sir or Madam Director:

My name is Colby. I am interested in working with your company. As my sponsor, this is what I can do for you. I can offer word-of-mouth advertising. I am currently employed by my father in the roofing industry. This allows me to meet many new people, including fishermen, throughout the state of Virginia . I can offer you standard logo placement on my boat. I will also be able to offer additional exposure opportunities through logo and decal placement on our 4 service vehicles. Additional exposure opportunities will also exist through 2 personal vehicles, and through our company billboard advertisements purchased for display in sports arenas and stadiums. These arenas/stadiums hold about 1,000 people each and people are in them almost every Thursday and Friday through half of the year.

My home lake is Smith Mountain Lake . I also enjoy fishing Roanoke , James, and New River . Though my status is an amateur, my abilities in fishing and my education in the fishing industry is improving every day. I feel I do have a lot of skill and expertise that I would be able to offer your company. I love fishing.


Thank you for reviewing my resume. I have attached my email address, for follow up replies. I hope we will be able to work together in the near future.

Thank you

Colby Howell

[Swede]

Colby -

Some feedback left for you in the "Chop Shop"

http://www.ultimatebass.com/bass-fishing-forum/index.php?topic=46295.0

Swede