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Title: here's my resume
Post by: burglure on May 14, 2007, 06:57:45 AM
Here's my resume.  Any advice is appreciated.

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Title: Re: here's my resume
Post by: Swede on May 17, 2007, 10:51:55 PM
Initial impression - good looking resume.  One thing that does stick out is the multiple use of "I".  Since the reader understands that you are talking about you, I'd shorten up the sentences using bullets - example:

Teacher - Cinncinnati Public Schools

Overall though - looks pretty good - maybe others have more.
Title: Re: here's my resume
Post by: burglure on May 18, 2007, 06:33:29 AM
Thanks, any feedback is appreciated and I will correct that.